Wakefield (2010) observes that digital divide is becoming
a growing concern in the world. In her article, she quotes sources from
International Telecommunications Union (ITU) that ranks countries based on
their internet connectivity and economic status, where the more economically
developed countries are the most connected. Reports from New America
Foundations (NAF) also show that the internet usage of a developed nation
is not proportionately represented as the rural areas tend to have lesser
internet access and usage as compared to the urban cities. The author
found that the less developed countries in Europe, which have noticed this
trend of unequal usage, try to increase their countries' access to internet of
the rural villages by providing Wi-Fi infrastructure to them. This helps
some villagers to improve their lives socially, economically and culturally.
However, according to Wakefield, there is a fundamental problem that deters the
internet usage in the rural areas to rise significantly. The internet usage is
too "sophisticated" for many of the uneducated and poor
villagers to comprehend and use. This shortcoming of technology has led me into
thinking what are the possible remedies and alternatives we have to develop a better
living environment for all.
I live in a highly
economically developed nation with advanced technology, but I also acknowledge
the fact that everyone has different resources and abilities. Some of the
people are simply too poor to afford the access to neither
technology nor an education that enables them to use these
technologies productively. However, Wakefield seems to neglect
this fact when she remarks that broadband connectivity will improve the
lives of people if they use it effectively. In fact, standing in the shoes of a
poor and uneducated villager who lives in the rural area of an economically
less developed country, I feel that technology may not be the most influential
factor that will improve the lives of these members of the society. I
will not deny the fact that technology and internet are crucial elements
that have brought prosperity and improvement in the living standards of
the people of my country. Yet, such degree of effective improvement in
standards of living is not applicable to everyone in my society
and other parts of the world.
According to the
Hierarchy of Needs (Maslow, 1943), 'needs' have different degrees and
layers. Many poor in the developing countries could not afford the basic
needs for survival, such as food and housing. Technology may then be one of the
irrelevant luxurious 'wants' of these poor as it creates an even heavier
financial burden to their lives. In fact, the article itself reports that Native
Americans who live in the 'barren desert' have to pay more for the Wi-Fi
access. In addition, the internet also may provide these less
privileged ones with information that will not help to improve their
standards of living in a direct and effective manner. This is mainly due to the
fact that some of these technologies are simply too expensive for them to use
in their daily lives. For instance, telemedicine, which allows patients to receive
medical treatment without the need of travelling long distances, is a costly
treatment which many poor villagers cannot afford (Hjelm, N. M, 2005).
Such situations are not only relevant in less developed countries; they also surface in highly developed countries, like Singapore and America. In these countries, income disparity is a serious problem in the society. In Singapore, despite the high Gross Domestic Product (GDP) per capita, many poor families still struggle with their basic needs. However, the Singapore government helps this group of people to cope with the advancing technology by providing them with Wi-Fi connection and ways to obtain the knowledge of using this technology. This helps the people to find such technology less alien to comprehend. First of all, the government subsidises housing, education and healthcare service, so that the less privileged members of the society can meet their fundamental needs for survival. After these subsidies are given, the people will receive help in learning the ways to use such technology. The young can learn in their educational institutions while the elderly will be educated on how to operate the computer in classes provided in Community Centres (CC).
Such situations are not only relevant in less developed countries; they also surface in highly developed countries, like Singapore and America. In these countries, income disparity is a serious problem in the society. In Singapore, despite the high Gross Domestic Product (GDP) per capita, many poor families still struggle with their basic needs. However, the Singapore government helps this group of people to cope with the advancing technology by providing them with Wi-Fi connection and ways to obtain the knowledge of using this technology. This helps the people to find such technology less alien to comprehend. First of all, the government subsidises housing, education and healthcare service, so that the less privileged members of the society can meet their fundamental needs for survival. After these subsidies are given, the people will receive help in learning the ways to use such technology. The young can learn in their educational institutions while the elderly will be educated on how to operate the computer in classes provided in Community Centres (CC).
Though such system is not perfect in allowing all citizens to have an access to the technology, it shows that the authority has taken note of the priority of needs and wants of the people. Although the access to technology and internet may not be the top priority of the less privileged members of the society, I agree with Wakefield’s view about the positive impact of effective usage of internet. This is probably why the government has implemented those programmes in Singapore to ensure the poor will not be left out in terms technological benefit after their basic needs have been well taken care of.
Instead, the Singapore government focuses
efforts on the education. The ruling authority believes that education is the most
effective factor in helping all the citizens to improve their quality of life
in the long run. Efforts, such as the idea of meritocracy and subsidised
education fees, allow all to have an equal opportunity to climb up the social
ladder and obtain a better material life for the individuals and their families.
All in all, I believe that effective usage
of technology will improve the lives of people in varying degrees, but it may
not be the most essential and useful factor to increase the standards of living
of the people, especially the less privileged members of the society. Education,
in my opinion, with the supplementary use of technology, can create a better
future for the people.
References:
Wakefield, J. (2010). World wakes up to digital divide. Retrieved September 10, 2014, from http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/technology/8568681.stm
Maslow, A.H. (1943). A theory of human motivation. Psychological Review, 50 (4), 370–96. Retrieved September 10, 2014, from http://psychclassics.yorku.ca/Maslow/motivation.htm
Hjelm, N. M. (2005). Benefits and drawbacks of telemedicine. Journal of Telemedicine and Telecare, 11 (2), 60-70
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ReplyDeleteIf Shu Ning and I identified correctly, your thesis statement is probably the last sentence of the post, "Education, in my opinion, with the supplementary use of technology, can create a better future for the people."
ReplyDelete1) Thesis should be at the next paragraph following the summary.
2) Thesis has a main idea but the entire post somehow deviates from the thesis statement. e.g. the entire third paragraph, "First of all, the government subsidises housing, education and healthcare service, so that the less privileged members of the society can meet their fundamental needs for survival." in the fourth paragraph.
3) We felt that "education" could be more specific, since it could mean technological education, language education etc.
Generally, we like that your thesis statement indicates a stand and has a main idea.
Great effort Ying Hui! :)
Thanks Maeve and Shu Ning! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, YingHui for this well-informed, insightful response. You do a very fine job of summarizing Wakefield and then building on that summary with a response. I like the way you focus on the idea that the underprivileged may not be able to benefit from CIT if there isn't some means of helping them become educated in it first.
ReplyDeleteAs Maeve and Shu Ning have mentioned, you might be able to improve this by presenting a thesis earlier in the response. That would probably give your discussion more focus.
One sentence with language issues: Some of the people are simply too poor to afford the access to neither technology nor an education that enables them to use these technologies productively. > either...or
Thanks for the great effort!
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DeleteThanks Brad! I guess you and Shuning and Maeve have misunderstood my thesis of this essay. I am not sure if my argument is 'valid', but I hope that I can elaborate my point more clearly for my next draft and convince my audience to agree with me.
DeleteSo nervous waiting for Brad's comment for draft 3! I am not sure if I can convince you guys with my argument in draft 3. Although I think I have tried my best to illustrate my stand for this reader response, it may be a little different from what you guys think (as I emphasised both the importance of "taking care of the basic needs" and "technological education")
DeleteBut I don't pin high hopes on getting a decent grade for that post after what Brad said during the Monday class.*Sigh*