The problem of 'stage fright' has always been the greatest issue I have when I have to do a presentation. Thus, I have difficulty engaging my audience and making eye contact with my audience in today's presentation.
Although I have spent quite some time to prepare my presentation, I fail to realise that my presentation lacks the element of clarity. I guess this problem arises because I forget that my audience does not know the background knowledge of my essay.
I am glad that ES1102 provides us this opportunity to do an individual presentation and allow me to realise what I am lacking in. Also, I would like to thank Brad and the rest of my peers who give me their sincere feedback so that I can improve my presentation skills!
Gamsahabnida (Thank you)!
Thank you, Ying Hui, for this honest reflection, and for working so hard on the presentation itself. I have no doubt that in your next essay, just like in your next presentation, you will benefit by the great effort you made in ES1102.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brad!
DeleteHello Ying Hui!
ReplyDeleteI think you were very brave to choose digital divide in North Korea as your area of study. I enjoyed your presentation, especially how you tried to get the audience identify the similarities between kpop stars (and their sponsorships of tech products) in the beginning - as I wouldn't have noticed that till you mentioned it. However, I do believe you can maintain more eye contact and speak in a more confident tone, which helps in engaging with the audience.
Thanks!
Thank you, Jiewei!
DeleteHi Ying Hui!
ReplyDeleteI think it was good that you did something different from the rest of the class. From your presentation, I could see that you have tried to solve the problems that we tried to identify before the submission of draft 2. (: During your presentation, it will be good to have more eye contact with the audience and try not to speak too fast as I could not get what you were talking at times. Other than that, I felt that the slides were good as I can still remember some of the photos you shown us.
Thanks!
Lyndsey